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NSF 2007 Anne Dittrick Sonnet Writing Contest

Congratulations to this year's winners and thank you to all who participated!

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High School Division                                            Adult Division

First Place                                                                                             First Place

Ope Omojola, Burke High School, 11th Grade                                  Arthur Brown, "Jackson Square, New Orleans"

Teacher, Deborah Ward                                                                         Evansville, IN 

Tonight the rain sprints fast from sky to ground                            Mid-morning as the Tarot cards proceeded,

It flees the fog of clouds in rows and lines                                   police removed the dead man from the square.

Of guided chill, of soft and splashy sound                                    A bride and groom pulled up, almost unheeded

That slowly fills and floods the world outside.                               a juggler tossed his pins into the air.

                                                                                        The general rode his rearing horse above

Inside, I slither, cold between my sheets                                    the palms, magnolias, and flower beds;

Surrounded by the noises, dark and deep                                    a black magician caged and cloaked his dove.

My blankets twisted, knotted 'round my feet                                Carriage horses shook their bridled heads;

My eyes unshut, unable now to sleep                                         the groom flung green and purple necklaces

                                                                                        into the crowd; the band came round the corner.

Through dark of night, with dreams meant still to come                 The cage collapsed before few witnesses.

I lay awake and feel the hours wear thin                                    The dead man passed, arms crossed, without a mourner -

The serenade of darkness' gentle hum:                                      looking kingly with his grizzled beard.

A lullaby that fails to tuck me in.                                             Above the lamp, the dove had reaapeared.

 

Impatiently, my sleepless heart will thrum

A count of minutes aching for the sun
 

Second Place                                                                                          Second Place

Cara Heacock, Burke High School, 12th Grade                                 William Baer, "Protanopia"

Teacher, Deborah Ward                                                                         Evansville, IN 

"What Are We?"                                                                                                    The Tate Gallery

Our names are letters all over again                                            He stood in the palace of color, colorblind,

In black and white, or white and black, we lie                                surrounded by Rossetti, Hunt, and John Millais,

Upon such threads and chords for a refrain                                    yet in the visual cortex of his mind,

We many little wooden puppets cry                                             their pinks were blue, their reds were black and gray.

                                                                                          His worthless retinal cones were still immune

But please take note of every single bar                                       to color brightness - permanent, severe,

When into our great riddle you do delve                                       congenital - but then she entered the room

So linearly organized we are                                                      and colored his world like Morris' Guinevere.

Sit quietly in little groups of twelve                                             He now could see the reddest crimson red,

                                                                                          and peacock, ruby, pink, and apricot.

The ivory stand mighty, you can see                                            "I don't know who or what you are," he said.

For two, seven by seven, one alone                                             "The cure," she answered with a smile. "For what?"

The ebony shy back from ivory                                                   Then drenched with color in the Pre-Raph wing,

For one and five by seven; sharper tone                                       she whispered in black-and-white: "Everything!"

 

Our number: twice infin'ty on its side

We sing when fingers upon us reside

 

(Answer: Piano Keys)
 

Third Place                                                                                              Third Place

Matt Suing, Burke High School, 10th Grade                                         Alison Wilson, "Retriever"

Teacher, Lindsay Wayt                                                                             Peru, NE 

Shall I compare thee to a winter's night?                                       In padded coveralls and boots, we mash

Your beauty forgotten in the snow storm,                                      through corn stalks, guns primed in our arms

Left alone in the dark without sunlight                                          Hooch scouts a yo yo dash

Will you leave me cold, when I need be warm?                               between us, eyes crisp as iron.

 

Shall I compare thee to autumn evening?                                      He rustles his nose into a mound

Leaving all trees exposed with no leaves,                                      of matted grass. He points. You nod.

For a harsh gust is just simple breathing.                                       Feathers, jeweled blue, green, brown

Is this really you, or am I deceived?                                             spin into sky.  You aim, take the shot.

 

Shall I compare thee to morning in spring?                                     Gun thunder thickens the air

With all things but predictable weather,                                         sifts burnt powder onto my lips.

Clouds, wind, and storms; who knows what you shall bring?               Hooch quivers, ears primped, eyes 

With wind to break branches, or brush feathers                               poised for the drop. But nothing hits. 

 

With harsh winters there, gentle summer here,                               From a corn stalk, Hooch rips an ear

You are not a season, No, the whole year.                                     and lays it at my feet like a flower. 

 

Honorable Mentions                                                                             Honorable Mentions

Mikaela Campbell, Papillion La Vista High Schoo, 12th Grade            Kelly Madigan Erlandson, "Maggie's Origami" 

Teacher, Mary Birky                                                                                     Lincoln, NE 

When summer days of heat and bliss are gone                                 She says she's good at folding things in half

The leaves of orange and yellow slowly fall                                     and I'll admit, I think it's quite a skill.

And later, later comes the crack of dawn;                                       This is the child who always makes me laugh

No longer do the birds or sparrows call.                                          long past the point at which I've said "Be still!"

Then coldness claims the vast and spacious land,                              She'll grimace, blow a kiss or pirouette

Takes over ground and sky for months to come                                in order to avoid the route to bed;

And death befalls, continues to expand.                                          fall backwards off the couch until I fret

It takes the plants - the grass, the trees in sum.                              she'll lacerate her knee or crack her head.

Now all the world is cold and dead and bare,                                   She's leapt from bunk beds, flipped from diving boards,

The naked branches lonely from the cold.                                       had stitches, cat scratch fever, broken bones,

The lifeless skinny stalks look up and stare,                                    then stayed up late to practice scales and chords

Still reaching out, companionless untold.                                        or organize each item that she owns.

While all the world remains to pass in lay,                                      She folds my tension, makes it happiness --

Inside they hope for yet a warmer day.                                          Zen master of the art of goofiness.       

 

Tue Tran, Creighton Prep, 12th Grade                                                    Fran Higgins, Going Home to Visit Mom (and Joe)

Teacher, Jeannie Brayman                                                                       Omaha, NE 

"A Page Almost Turned"                                                             My knuckles feel relaxed as i stare out

We thought for sure forever we would be                                       above the steel wing that cuts the sky.

Those timid creatured marching in these halls.                                Pinks and yellows sprawl, a lake of clouds

We saw the lengthy path we were to see,                                      below.  Horizon steams, a cobalt stripe.

Confined by all these solid, glazed-brick walls.                                Terrorists be damned, I'm not afraid.

As slates so blank, naive we were so sure                                      to threat-condition colors I am blind.

From us, this world had nothing left to hide                                    A red alert can't make me wish I'd stayed

That we had found the be-all, end-all cure                                     grounded.  Sunlight swirls to ease my mind.

That we'd discovered all of what's inside.                                       But the closer to my destination,

But then we lived and loved and laughed and grew                           the more I doubt the prudence of this trip.

By meeting others who, to us, would show                                     What lies ahead launches palpitations.

There's so much more to life than what we knew                             Suddenly I'm small and unequipped

And still there's so much more we need to grow.                             to deal with going home to see my mother.

Althought the future calls this page to end,                                    Flying's easier than a drunken brother.

To reach our goals and dreams, we must ascend!

 

Sarah Michaels, Home School, 11th Grade  

Teacher, Sondra Michaels                                    

Another night the stars burn bright and clear

And shed their crystal light upon the lake.

The moon is but a sliver, soft and sheer.

The gentle summer wind no noise will make.

                                                          

So soft upon the water floats a swan,

Leaving quiet ripples in her wake.

In the grass, her chicks will sleep till dawn

All the while she watches 'cross the lake.

 

For hours and hours I'd walk along the shore,

Watching as the stars moved through the sky.

List'ning as the music of the spheres

Sings the world a lovely lullaby.

 

And as the night fades slowly into day

Wand'ring on the watery shore I stay. 

 

Click here to read last year's sonnet winners. 

 

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